kperdnusse1 (kperdnusse1) wrote in jackxianto,
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Beta help please

My fic needs prodding for ooc, helping the flow, and a sex scene needs mending. Failing that, just say it's beyond help and move onto something else or stop writing. It's about 2000 words, mostly Janto with some team, and it might help if you've read Pack Animals. Thanks :)
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