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29 October 2010 @ 08:43 pm


CHARACTERS: JACK-IANTO, MARTHA-MICKEY, RHYS-GWEN, ALONZO, LOIS, RHIANON and others that came from my imagination.

SUMMARY: Jack has to come back to Earth, there’s going to be a war between good and evil.


DISCLAIMER: The characters, songs, films, ideas, don’t belong to me. I like to write because I like to dream. I’m not making money with this story.

NOTE: This is the first fic I wrote, but for technical reasons I could never post it. When I learned to post (not as good as you) I read it and decided to write it again and it turned to 10 parts. Thanks, badly knitted, for your advice.





Jack was felling guilty, he had betrayed Ianto. When he died in his arms, Jack had promised not forget him in 200 years. And now,  for the Doctor’s “prescription”, he had slept with Alonzo.

Alonzo was trying to encourage Jack “You don’t have to feel bad, we were to drunk”. Jack was with his eyes full of tears “But I betrayed his memory. And I don’t want to hurt you, either. Alonzo smiled “It was just a shag, let`s forget about it, ok???” They talked about a lot of things and then became great friends, the only thing Jack needed at that moment.

But on Earth, things were very different. Gwen and Rhys were living happy with his son Kai. But Gwen wanted Jack to come back. She missed him deeply… and Ianto, too. She befriend Rhiannon, Ianto’s sister and both hoped that someday Jack returned. She told Rhi how much Jack took care on his little brother and Rhi wanted to share memories with him.

Jack had decided never return to the Earth, but fate had other plans.

The rift in Cardiff each day had become more dangerous and a new threat was approaching, more sinister than anything they might have faced. Good and evil were to have a confrontation over land.

Gwen was on her way home, when a beam appeared in front of her, leaving a strange creature at her side. Was it an alien, an angel or a fairy??? Gwen felt no fear. The girl smiled  “I need your help, we all are in danger.”

In Gwen's flat, Muset, explained her and a surprised Rhys, she was a sorceress of a dimension that existed parallel to the world they knew. The invasion of the 456 had produced an imbalance between the two dimensions. The diabolical underworld was trying to get into the ground and exterminate all the witches, wizards and good fairies who coexisted with humanity. They had lost many battles trying to stop its advance, and now, they requested the assistance of Torchwood. Gwen couldn’t believe that they knew about them. Muset told her they were watching them, but were unable to intervene, it was forbidden, but the threat was iminent. Torchwood… Gwen explained her Torchwood no longer existed and Jack, his leader, has gone.

Muset told her it was necessary he came back, Torchwood had to fight again, it would be the only salvation for humanity. Gwen didn’t know what to do, then she thought about Matha Jones and called her.

Martha succeed, with the cell the doctor had given her, she located Jack, who could not refuse to return, bringing  Alonzo with him  as a new recruit.

Three days later, Jack, Gwen, Martha, Mickey, Alonzo and Lois, were  with Muset. Jack couldn’t believe Muset “You are a powerful sorceress. Why do you need us??? We are just humans beings.” Muset was upset “Jack, you fought against Abaddon, Bilis Manger and The Dark. You are the guardians of the rift. You are responsible for saving humanity. We fight for our interests, but we can’t do anything for your people. The Demons want to reach the rift to create a larger portal and take over the land and have more opportunities to exterminate us. Unfortunately, you are in the middle of our battle.” Lois was very scared, "But we're not like the Winchester brothers" Mickey turned to see her "Who???" Gwen explained, "A TV show." Jack frowned "Guys, let's be serious. Okay, Muset, we are going to help you fighting the demons. Now, we must draw a plan"

Meanwhile, in the underworld, Uyole was talking to her lover, Phaneas, planning where they could attack. They had succeeded in opening a little portal that would lead directly to the Forest of Cardiff. Her servants, the twins Ling and Ming, were listening carefully everything they were saying.
The attack would be on Saturday night, no one would realize the threat. It was Thursday, still had time to plan things well.

Jack was thinking they needed a place to work, it was dangerous to be in Gwen's flatt. The little Kai had left into the care of Rhi, who had shown herself delighted to have him, asking Gwen please told Jack that when he had a moment come to visit her.
Muset wanted to know where they used to work, Jack told her the place had exploded, the first level was destroyed, but there were parts still intact.

One of Muset’s gifts was to rebuild everything material.
They went to the place and with a spell, Torchwood regained his Hub. It was not exactly the same, because the doors had to be repositioned, but they had a place to work.

Being in the hub, Muset received a message that the attack would be on Saturday night, both Torchwood and the wizards would be ready.
That Saturday, the battle was terrible,
throughout the forest it could hear bullets and curses, in the air crossed beams of white light and black light. Luckily none of the members of Torchwood were wounded. But Jack, in the fight, killed Phaneas, Uyole's lover.

She became really angry and sweared to take revenge against him, she would find the most cruel way to hurt Jack. Uyole began to investigate ways to destroy Jack, so she sent a spy to follow him.
Jack went to visit Rhi, he talked a lot about Ianto and how much he missed him and wanted to be with him, that it was his fault he had died, Rhi was convinced it was not his fault, he did not have to think about that. None of them noticed the raven who listened carefully to their talk.
Uyole was really excited when his spy told her what he had heard, she couldn’t return Phaneas’ life, but she could  bring back a human from dead, using the worst part of Black Magic, Necromancy. That would be her revenge, Ianto who charged her revenge destroying Jack and those around him, she could give him enough power to do it. First, she should go visit the demons leaders, the Elders, to ask for their permission, the magic that she was going to use was too dangerous and prohibited.

Once Uyole made the deal with the most ancient demons, she appeared in the cemetery on Sunday at midnight, with their servants Ming and Ling, who watched her as contemptuous. Uyole did the spell:

“Ianto Jones I invoke the power of Fire, the strongest of all elements, the power of the eldest demons and the darkest magic. Get up from the world of the dead, be alive again to be our slave, our servant. Rise from the grave.”










Current Location: my sofa
Current Mood: anxiousanxious
Current Music: Hocus Pocus
zazajbzazajb on October 30th, 2010 09:08 am (UTC)
oooh, interesting...Ianto returned but as a weapon of evil... Look forward to part 2 xxx
toshiani007 on October 30th, 2010 01:12 pm (UTC)
^-^ malicious giggles ^-^ Ianto is going to return very different, you'll see it soon, I think you'll be surprised. ;-) ***lot of hugs*** xxx
jsks on October 30th, 2010 06:11 pm (UTC)
what will jack do when confronted by the demon ianto?
toshiani007 on October 30th, 2010 06:17 pm (UTC)
***malicious grinned*** You'll see, it'll be a surprise. ;-) Thanks!!!
chocolateniantochocolatenianto on October 30th, 2010 09:05 pm (UTC)
ooohhh interesting. What will Jack do when he sees Ianto and realises he is being controlled by evil? Um!
toshiani007 on October 30th, 2010 11:54 pm (UTC)
***malicious smile*** You'll see soon!!! I'm glad you find it interesting. Thanks!!! :D
badly_knitted: My Captainbadly_knitted on October 31st, 2010 10:43 am (UTC)
Evil demons are Evil! How cruel to bring Ianto back as their slave, a tool to destroy Jack and Torchwood!

I love how you dealt with the Jack/Alsonso bit. Now they're good friends he'll be a big help. Looking forward to the next part =) *hug*
toshiani007 on October 31st, 2010 02:34 pm (UTC)
Ianto is stronger than anyone can imagine, you'll see!!! Alonzo will have a fun and interesting part in this fic. This story is written to have a happy ending, because I do believe in happy endings. Thank you, friend, for your support and your advice. ***lot of hugs*** xxx ;-)